I see that we again have another fine example of abstract art. I actually have both the good and the bad in terms of points here, but I will start with the good.
I love your use of different gradients, which seems to be a specialty of yours. I also noticed that you enjoy fading from sharp to dull colors. In some cases this can be good, or it can be bad. In your work, I find that it is good. The style is completely unique to you. I can honestly say that I have never seen anything quite like this. Because of all of the above, you get full stars on Vision, and Originality.
I actually had several reasons for giving you only 4 stars for technique. One of them is that there was way to many different colors, some of which do work against each other a little too much. I wont list them all, but thats because most of the other reasons where really to small to make a huge impact if changed. I might have been a bit harsh in giving you only 3 and a half stars on impact, but the main reason for that is too much blurring. I understand where it fits into the piece, and actually commend you for applying it at all as very few others do, but in this piece I just see too much of it. My recommendation is more shine, less blur but keep some in. If you keep working at it, you will defiantly pull it off.
In summery, this was a great design, and I deeply enjoyed writing the Critique for it. Despite the loss on Impact, I still view this as one of the best Abstract designs that I have had the pleasure of seeing. I congratulate you on the great work, and encourage you to continue. Great job. Thumbs up from me.
I love your use of different gradients, which seems to be a specialty of yours. I also noticed that you enjoy fading from sharp to dull colors. In some cases this can be good, or it can be bad. In your work, I find that it is good. The style is completely unique to you. I can honestly say that I have never seen anything quite like this. Because of all of the above, you get full stars on Vision, and Originality.
I actually had several reasons for giving you only 4 stars for technique. One of them is that there was way to many different colors, some of which do work against each other a little too much. I wont list them all, but thats because most of the other reasons where really to small to make a huge impact if changed.
I might have been a bit harsh in giving you only 3 and a half stars on impact, but the main reason for that is too much blurring. I understand where it fits into the piece, and actually commend you for applying it at all as very few others do, but in this piece I just see too much of it. My recommendation is more shine, less blur but keep some in. If you keep working at it, you will defiantly pull it off.
In summery, this was a great design, and I deeply enjoyed writing the Critique for it. Despite the loss on Impact, I still view this as one of the best Abstract designs that I have had the pleasure of seeing. I congratulate you on the great work, and encourage you to continue.
Great job. Thumbs up from me.
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